Because I know I've been mistaken,
I'll ask you to clear this out:
Is there only one way out?
Is there more than one, but taken?
Mystic shapes surround our living,
Which, as a mystic shape itself,
Is around only to give us help
To evolve and reach the freedom.
My dear friend, correct me if I'm wrong,
But I think I found the answer here;
It is simply more than clear:
I just took another road...
Author notes
~By Masky. (Very weirdly) inspired by picture!
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Indeed.
I find myself on this crossroads all the time. -
although it doesn't seem that way in first view, the reader definately needs to keep his mind with the poem or he'll get lost in it
I like that actually, the way you somehow 'force' the reader to think about your words
I also like the coincidental rhyme you've embedded in some lines well done!
Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
I did enjoy ...
your poem and yes, I do see that we started out at the same intersection. I commend you for sharing of your thoughts in English, which I assume is not your first language and I admire your tenacity to do so. Keep up your studies and sharing on yourself. joy
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Thank you very much, all your thought are much appreciated, joy!!
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Wonderfully and masterfully put dear poet. I really enjoyed this piec. I loved the idea of taking another road rather than there be something wrong or missing. Great work.
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Kay Vi, you got me! That was wierd and made no sense! Still luv ya though! Why haven't you been replying to my messages?! Now I'm gonna cry!
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Definately a different twist to the prompt... Nice job on the write Masky~
Congrats on making it to round 2 ~ good luck to you! -
Vi,the way you manage to keep the beat in here is simply amazing!well done again!what more can i say than gooooooooooood luck in the contest! and keep writing!
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