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The Rose Of Deceit

You and I were the kings and queens of an age
We had it all
Beauty, intelligence-
The flow of eloquence

You were a sugarcube of sweetness
That glint in your eye
I now realise- 'twas not kindness
But bitterness

With cigarette in mouth
You were Tallulah bankhead
Sharp, the picture of elegence
"'Dahling" was all you said

You were a flower- a rose
Who brought me on a magnificent ride
But as time went on
The rose slowly withered and died

Now when our eyes meet
All I see is deceit




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  • Lyrical Rain
    November 3, 2007
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    I like it but it really didn't fulfill my subject matter. Thank you for entering my contest.