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Recycling Sounds

Lights in the woods #2 

All seemed serene in woodland scene,

ant teams, sunbeams, spread out,

and yet, unseen, Fate forged break clean,

worked from within without

a doubt as time beat time with time

to pass from ph[r]ase to ph[r]ase

assisting rhyme on onward climb,

ensuring reader stays.  

.

Some squirrels frisked with tails well whisked

from tree to tree, perch - perch,

fur fair and bisqued, as nut search risked

spring lurch from beech to birch.

All seemed content, on life intent,

scent framed by sunset's flame,

as if time spent "forever" meant,

which wildness would not tame. 

.

Four foxcubs crept while vixen kept

an eye alert and sly,

two hedgehogs slept, - all calm except

some fly swept swifly by.

Green lizard leapt, stagbeetle crept,
dust filled the air in just
a trice none wept when down tree swept,
thrust by untimely gust.

Dank fungus tossed, moss counted cost,
as trunk came tumbling down,
birds, flustered, flew from leafy pew
as branches struck the ground.

Bright butterfly, buzz bees awry,
swarmed from high nest wild swung
avoiding harm, though none were calm,
hums angry drones begun.

There was no bliss, no parting kiss

when tree from root split, Crack !
no adder lisped an added hiss
as after shock waved back.

The sound it made forever stayed

within the forest glade
that sound "afraid" spelled out, dismayed
a moment as tree paid
the tribute due that life owes to
all other life around,
when something new must flourish too -
upon which we'll expound :

.

Time’s tide destroys all equipoise
from Peter steals, pays Paul,
whatever ploys the first employs
strength peters, keels, then pall
what once was head enshrouds instead
as crown comes tumbling down,
so one once led stands in its stead
as emperor or clown.
 

Life from Death knew to take its cue
as cycles spin around, -
one bids adieu while where it grew
another springs unbound. 
Thus all evolve as we revolve
round central sun which spins
in turn to solve or to resolve
the questions no one wins.

For mouse and man so seldom can
stump up a rich reply
which well can scan of house and plan
the “how, when, where and why.”
Well may we ask who, lazy, bask
beside life’s swirling sea,
“why must life’s flask need Death's dark mask
how come this comes to be ?”

.

While years revolve all niches evolve,

test, protest limits – we

who problems solve, in turn dissolve,

recycling guarantee

so each in turn may sunlight earn

so future that should be

plays out its term, to squander, learn,

to spawn, to spore, seed free. .

 

Trees, starting small, rise tall, then fall, fulfilling destiny,
whose constant call stays on the ball
in perpetuity

so all that would flows as it should, through struggle to the skies,

throughout the wood, takes what it could

from life, until, Time’s yarn spins spill - it dies.

Author notes

AN Jonathan Robin

Variation on a Theme :
Leaflet http://allpoetry.com/poem/2635504




3D pic hmluker / Jupiter Pete
http://flickr.com/photos/hmluker/299307682/in/set-72157594197940916/

see also
http://digital-photography-school.com/blog/9-crazy-cross-eye-3d-photography-images-and-how-to-make-them/


Pic 2 Rob Johnston
http://www.flickr.com/photos/walkaboutwolf/63452603/


see John Johnson
http://allpoetry.com/poem/1136565

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  • Tqop
    September 25

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    Excellent. I really love how you started it off. You are intelligent and brilliant. I wish I could be brilliant like you. Well done.

  • izzy1804
    August 31
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    Really good....I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck.


  • kylierenea
    August 15

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    Wow, I really liked this poem. I like how you added a little bit of color Keep up the good work


  • condor gold member
    August 14

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    A wonderful piece that had me smiling all the way. Poems about nature and animals are ones that will always capture my heart. This was simply amazing and sat beautifully with me. With so many entries, i can only answer those that I add to the finalist list, so thank you for entering and good luck.

  • beautiful! this was really good! i enjoyed reading this immensely. great emotions and imagery in this piece. good luck in the contests.

  • Wow... Are all your poems like this? I would love to read some more, may I have your username please so I can read some more, I would also like to add you as a favourite, if that is okay?

    This poem is truely... breath taking would be the word I am looking for. I second what K-a-r-s says, I have never read anything like this before, I certainly can't complain it doesn't rhyme, you truely have some great skill with writing. In some parts of the poem it's like a tongue twister, which I actually quite enjoyed. This really is a wonderful poem. "Four foxcubs crept while vixen kept
    an eye alert and sly,
    two hedgehogs slept, - all calm except
    some fly swept swifly by." This is one of my favourite bits, I'm not sure why, but this bit just stands out really well, I think it's cause you can actually use the poem to see this scene in your head.

    I honestly think this is a great poem, and I thank you for sharing it with us, I also thank you for entering my contest.

    Thanks
    Hannah


  • K-a-r-s
    August 10

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    Wow this is very very very very good i have never read anything like this...NIce job with this poem...you should deffinatly keep writing more poems..i would love to read some more of your work.


  • Tinselpool
    August 5

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    Wow, this was beautiful. You are very insightful and this is a unique perspective on this topic. Not everyone can see it through your eyes like this, and understand. Though, we are harming nature, you light a flame of belief in my mind, that we can change.
    Never stop penning,
    Claire

  • Very good. I liked how you took this. Your imagery is superb and I like the way you portrayed nature. Congrats on your shinys. The only thing I disliked about this, was the colour change in the font. It's kind of distracting. Great job though, and good luck in the contest.


    Josh

  • wow thats all i got wow

  • hmm this is very interesting. like my friend Kate down there I''m not all what to say. You've got a 9 for this poem. Your total is 20 so far. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. Kahy

  • Wow, what persistence. I love the format. So insightful, interesting, beautiful. Good luck.

  • Interesting...I'm not sure what to say..

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate


  • Floorboards
    March 6

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    Faultless

    Fantastic, you're a great talent, Jonathan. I've read your work before (A dog's life) but I much prefer this, unique, intelligent, and thoughtful. Onto my favourites you go.

    Very well done.

    Floorboards.


  • dutch2lips gold member
    March 5

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    great write, a funny touch using different colours, not my thing but none the less a piece worth reading more then once, well done


  • Predaw
    March 4
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    "Green lizard leapt" Made my eyes bleed. Not the words but the color... Lol... Anyway, Good poem.

  • Kaosumaru
    January 25

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    wonderful

    this poem is as my verdict states, wonderful. This is a true beauty describing the life that goes on under our nose, that we are often completely unaware of. It describes the same cycles that we ourselves go through in life, and it is seldom differing. i like this poem, as well as your writing style. its unique.


  • Merry Christmas
    January 14

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    A very nice poem, good imagery and description. A wonderful feeling about it.

    Thanks for entering.


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 5
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    This is a very nice piece. Thanks for entering. Shancy.


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Wonderful piece. Very unique. Love the title, and this piece flows so well. The imagery is fantastic! Great job and good luck in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Ryno
    January 3

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    First of all... I am no expert in form/rhyme, but I no what I like and what I don't like. It is normally hard for a lot of people to pull off rhyme, because it always seems so forced and so cliche, that it just takes over the poem and limits the writer from any creativity... but, with this piece, ESPECIALLY with all these rhymes, I was thoroughly impressed. I could not find one rhyme I thought was forced... it just flowed so well together.

    Also, I loved how this started out slow and gradually grew stronger and stronger throughout until your concept finally emerged... and there was a strong, interesting message behind.

    Vivid, strong descriptions - you really aided the reader in imagining what was happening...

    Thank you for the entry.


  • ASmileForYou
    December 9, 2008

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    I love this poem. The imagery is beautiful and everything is worded so perfectly! Thanks for entering the contest!


  • Kiss the girl--x
    November 24, 2008

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    this is brilliantly written with amazing imagery, and it was just written really strongly, only thing i would say, is that I found myself slightly distracted by the odd coloured phrase, otherwise it was brilliant

    thanks for entering


  • Ellis gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    For sure evolution couldn't occur without the cycle of birth and death. Through the agency of time, the purpose seems to be to create many, many individuals. Time is our measurement of forms of motion of matter (matter in motion - Thomas Hobbes). Forms are "the thing," -- here in matter, -- in other dimensions possibly without matter. The "arrow of time" (everything that is going on) reveals purpose. The evidence here is for Intelligent Design in this universe. We are in the middle between quarks and galaxies. No, a person didn't design all this, but Something did and for a reason.

  • poets whisper gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    as already said, well deserved trophies and congratulations. I asked for your favorite and this is great. I'm wondering why it is your favorite. Thank you for entering


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    November 4, 2008

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    You deffenetly deserved all those trophies you have received. Your poetry has such a smooth flow to it, the rhyme seems unbroke, wonderful imagery, very well done. Thank you for entring my contest.

  • headintheclouds
    October 13, 2008
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    This is so natural and the picture ties it together so well good luck in my contest


  • Symphony
    October 9, 2008

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    So many trophies but all deserved; you write with such remarkable aplomb, imagery is always spot on ; so descriptive, this in particular made me feel as though i was really there. Fantastic!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    October 3, 2008

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    Some beautiful imagery here, nice and long but lovely also love how you used colours to bring out nature in this piece.


  • Rakerman1
    October 3, 2008
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    Truly excellent writing.

    Very well done and thanks for entering

    Raker

  • Going Forever
    September 25, 2008

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    WOW! Great work on this one...love the pics on the top! they're beautiful!
    Best wishes in the contest!


  • thearmsofsorrow
    September 10, 2008

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    this is soo good. seriously. wow.
    the quality of entries im getting is amazing
    can i have your author name please?
    cheers
    x


  • unavailable
    September 5, 2008
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    Very fine writing.


  • xCandieKissesx
    August 28, 2008

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    There was no kiss, no parting bliss
    when tree from root split, Crack !
    no adder lisped an added hiss
    as after shock waved back.

    So beautifully penned and heartfelt indeed. Good luck!


  • MelodiousDreaming
    August 26, 2008

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    Spectacular

    Well deserving of its rewards (and many more if you ask me) It was soo well written and, well, to be honest I've no clue what else to say. It was just wonderful, you're very talented and I look forward to reading more from you ^_^


  • z etoile
    August 15, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem. This imagery was beautiful. The pictures with the poem was beautiful and look at all the trophies I am impressed keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    MJ


  • SignifyingNothing
    August 3, 2008

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    OH this is a pure delight. Wonderful rhyme with a great rhythm, flowing words, and deep as well. Great entry! Straight to finalists.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    Very scenic and the imagery was fantastic.


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    very creative

    you penned this so very well and yes it does soothe the soul and takes me back years of when we saw peace and tranquality, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Lin


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 18, 2008
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    Beautifully wrote, it is very serene and gentle and just sort of soothes the soul, like a wood nymphs song.

  • Virgoan
    June 7, 2008

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    i like the place - the imagery you have put me into.

    well done

    keep on sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY


  • Kp.s
    April 19, 2008

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    Wonderful. I enjoyed this poem as much if not more than your last. You really have a gift for rhyming, it flows so well, this reminded me of something you would read in a book at the beginning- a happy woodland song sang by little critters. As the poem went on, it turned into a insightful, wise testament to the tree. I loved it, your last two stanzas were my favourite. Great work,
    KP


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    A very nice write I like thw Rythem and Rhyme it all flowed so very smooth.
    Thank you for your entry Good Luck in the contest


  • Yellow-Rose
    April 15, 2008

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    OMG!!!! This is absolutely amazing poetry. I don't think I have ever read anything quite like it. Flawless rhythm and rhyme. I especially loved the first few stanza's where I really felt a part of the busyness that goes on in the forest. Even though there is peace in the forest, there is still alot happening. I will keep reading this. You are very talented. Thank you for you entry


  • frownsnfreckles
    April 9, 2008

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    Wonderful! I have been driving through the Forest of Dean to work since October, it has inspired poetry and photography. The detail in this is remarkable and incredibly visual without losing itself in metaphor or imagery. Just one thing, final stanza, fourth line you have mispelt recycling. I'm surprised you didn't win a trophy for this.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    For sharing your words is a gift
    A gift reflecting nature
    Then comes man and his self destruction
    A true reflection my dear poet
    Julie


  • xox-emma-xox
    April 7, 2008
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    Very nicly done... but it was long. I don't mind. I liked it very much!
    Ema ^_^


  • DrunkenRam
    March 29, 2008

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    This is very well deserving of the twin Beer Mugs, I would fill them for you if I could.
    difficult to read aloud, that is the only negative thing about this write.
    I was pleasantly deceived by the title, I thought I was going to get lectured on the fundamentals of sorting my trash, instead I was treated to a very wonderful description of "Mother Nature's way"
    Thank you for the trip through the Forrest.
    and Oh yes, I do re-cycle quite a bit.

  • Kitch
    March 29, 2008

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    Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love how the words all fit together and you use words that sound the same but have very different meanings. I also love the unusual format you have used such as using short hand punctuation to mean the same as words. A VERY good write.


  • tehzeeb
    March 29, 2008

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    you deserve a gold cup for this. truely amazing!
    my favorite part was " time's yarn spins spill.. it dies." it has so much meaning to it


  • forgot2b3forgotten
    March 29, 2008

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    mmm.. this is.. gee i dont even know what to say.. its amazing.. and completly outstanding.. this is a great piece you should like everyone is saying get it published


  • Willowhaunt
    March 28, 2008

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    WOW. This is one of the best poems I've had the pleasure to read here on AP. You should definitely get this published ^^

    The rhyme is OUTSTANDING! And the flow is beautiful; likewise the imagery is simply phenomenal. You've captured the balance of nature in a lyrical fantastic-reality.

    Well done!
    Keep Quilling,
    Whiskey


  • Room without doors gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Outstanding

    This is lyrical and refined with an engaging tone and full of natural imagery which you bring to life in front of our eyes. I especially liked the second stanza with the squirrels. A well-deserved gold trophy.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    So much to see in these lines- liked the flow, rhythm, rhyme of this poem. Nice gold to add to your collection too. Way to go.


  • jbbrandi
    March 11, 2008

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    Beautiful! I loved the rhyming and the rhythm; very interesting! Amazing write! Good luck in the contest!


  • Hetha gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    As one who believes and upholds balance and moderation in all things, I would say this is a magnificent expression of just how powerful time, in and of itself recycles and renews all forms of life. I found this entrancing. I may have to read it again, and again. It's more than worthy of a thousand trophies. It expresses so much, not only in rhyme and meter, imagery and metaphor, but your onomatopaeia.

  • Jamik
    October 31, 2007
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    !

    Good!


  • sshevak silver member
    October 29, 2007
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    Hmmmm...

    You excel in writting, that's no question about it..


  • waydownuponjoy
    October 28, 2007

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    A metaphorical expression

    of nature and the nature of nature that will time and again renew itself. It has been said "that in living we are dying and in dying we come alive ..."jabw - I shall not tire of reading your thoughts and always look forward to finding new leaves in an old forest. I do hope that I am not blocked from expressing my gratitude for you sharings. joy

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