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1am Party In Chicago

Drowning in cheap perfume,
You press the bottle to your lips.
Instant Gratification is in,
Dignity is out.

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  • Suzanne Dia
    October 30, 2007
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    lol

    sounds like a night on the town
    sad, but made me laugh somehow anyway

    thank you