The
crisp clear
day
lingers,
as leaves fall.
Calling
the
anxious
snowflakes of
the northern wind.
Chills tingling
my spine,
as
autumn
and winter
embrace
in
nature's
waltz.
A contest entry
- October's Stun by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended October 29, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh such a dance..of leves, of swirling snow...of the two...beautifully done. I love the images that dance here.
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I hear you~ we just had some snow the other day, and it is a crisp waltz isn't it. Leaves and snowflakes mingling. I liked this one alot.
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Muddy . . . the Autumn has stuck rather quickly up here on the West Coast of Canada and reading this piece reminded me that it would be better if I stayed indoors today . . . this poem made me shiver.
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