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Love And Devotion.

When thinking about falling in
love with someone,  you should
think with your heart.

Being in lov e is beautiful
thing. knowing that your
attached to each other wings.

Devotion is apart of entwining
as one. Knowing that you two
will be tied together when life
is done.

If the problem you starts
to make your heart feel swollen,
just think about being in love,
and being devoted.

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  • Beverlynohime
    November 1, 2007
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    Very Nice flow I really like this. ^_^


  • She burns
    October 28, 2007

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    Awww this inpsires and amke you feel good somehow, oh falling in love, it's scary and so beautiful at the same time...


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 28, 2007

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    It's true, love elevates us. It can also be a pain in the butt too, lol.

    There's a few typos here, just letting you know so you can correct them if you wish. I like when people tell me (I make tons of them, lol.)