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4 a.m. Rant

It's four in the morning,
Don't know why I am awake.
I'm lost in all thought,
Feel like I'm about to rant.

Two boys I love,
One boy I hate.
I feel totally lost,
On everything these days.

I guess no one cares,
For something like me.
I can't even describe,
What in the world I am.

And the ones I thought cared,
Lied through their teeth.
The ones I love to death,
Don't love me back.

The boy I hate,
I can't even tell,
What he did;
Just cause it hurts.

I'm alone in this place,
Got nothing else to say.
Why do I feel,
So out of place?

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I feel so numb right now.

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  • Katli
    October 30, 2007
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