Is this real?
Two years is a lifetime to feel this way about someone.
Is it love?
Even through long walks and awkward silences, can I survive this?
Unanswered questions can't be avoided forever.
Is it love when I dream about you constantly, even when i'm awake?
Is it love when I can't speak when you're around me?
Is it love when I feel empty when you're gone?
I guess only time can tell,
hopefully the hourglass is small...then maybe the sands will hit the bottom soon
and my life will finally begin
with you.
A contest entry
- [[ Hate to Love You ]] -PW Allowed- ENTER PPL! D= by ThatONEweirdChick.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - * * * loving you forever ? * * * by The Hardest Goodbye.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a wonderful poem
i liked it very much! thanks for entering it in my contest 
xo
kandy -
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Is it love when I can't speak when you're around me?
Is it love when I feel empty when you're gone?"
Indeed, it is so hard to tell what is really love nowadays with the word being flung around like a yo yo. Great poem. -
Oh nice way to say the feeling..I guess it's hard to tell if something is really love or what. It's painful too. Not quite sure if this really shows the hating part as much but a nice poem. Thanks for entering.
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answered questions can't be avoided forever.
hopefully the hourglass is small...then maybe the sands will hit the bottom soon
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I like the message, I too am feeling a similar feeling, I've been with the same girl for nearly two years now. and I'm starting to think she's the one... though I thought she was the one a long time ago, but now we're dealingwith college, and getting by greateven though we're like 12 hours away! well onto the actual poem part of this contest... it was a fair poem. not really bad, but not really good. seemed to jump around aimlessly, wasnt sure what you were getting at the whole time, but mostly it all makes sense...
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What the heck
my friend -- TChaplinette
accidentally wrote this while I was
logged in on her compt
so it shows up as if I wrote it?
Ill have to go tell her.
Haha.
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