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The tree made not a sound

The tree made not a sound
though the wind blew
ghosts haunted the very grounds
lethargy nausea in form ascended
vines covering trunk and limb.

ya bats dung spiders black
mumbles a little fat being
in a witches hat
Lil this Lil that
green slimy stew spewing out
of an old pot so nasty black

crawling rats dangling heads
voices heard of the long thought dead.
Mommy kept turning the channels
everything was too scary
Anyway
Cherish and Avia were hiding with Nana
under the pooh blanket fast asleep





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  • parenchma
    July 26
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    Painted the mood
    captured the moments
    keep it in the treasure chest

  • icyrose
    July 7

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    aah halloween...so many realities at once. No one knows what happens in hidden coves at midnight ^^. Very descriptive!


  • Sagerider
    February 9

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    This brings back memories

    Sometimes the little ones would be frightened even though they really knew who was under the costume. Very descriptive. I love it.


  • Davidlind
    November 6, 2007
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    Scary stuff. I wish I had known about this last week.


  • Playjazz66 silver member
    November 2, 2007
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    Now I know why I stay home and pass out the candy! Yuck!! LOL


  • Mujina
    October 31, 2007
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    hmm.. Interesting
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