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Embrace In Fading Light

Love and passion feeling so right
melting into each others
eyes our souls taking
flight

A loving embrace in fading light
ascending our spirits
to an unbreakable
height

My lover and shining star so bright
you fill my heart with hope
upon this glorious
night

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  • penman gold member
    November 1, 2007

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    Excellent

    What great passions you wove into this beautiful creation. So very well done and masterful. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Bob Fox
    October 30, 2007
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    Hey

    Tony you starting to make me belive in love. great little write


  • Desire gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Beautiful!!

    Wowzers!!
    Beautiful piece You have versed with rhyme that flows from one sentence to the next
    Lovely images to swoon the mind~~
    get the reader to go
    Magnificent job my Friend!
    I see Your other half got swooned
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!

    Keep that quill dancing~~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 28, 2007

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    Oh honey this is beautiful
    I love the way you set the mood with your flowing words
    and the form . such amazing rhyme...
    I envy the way your able to rhyme so well...

    you

    Delila


  • Swan song gold member
    October 28, 2007
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    Awesome! this was good. This is a cool form you pened here and it helps the flow of the poem


  • Addicted to Rehab
    October 28, 2007

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    My lover and shining star so bright
    you fill my heart with hope
    upon this glorious
    night
    ...I was thinking theses same thoughs just a few mins ago...My beautiful Sunshine makes me feel immortal as if with her by my side I can conquer the world...


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    This is very beautiful. Sweet and tender expressions of love, and it flows very nicely. really delighted in this poem, excellent imagery, spoke sweetly to my heart. thank you for sharing~blessings always~


  • Stardust-luvr
    October 28, 2007

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    my dear your words truly express the love that is within my heart and soul with visionary daydreams of the passions as of lately that shine within my spirit when I feel whole for you and many of my friends upon this site know I am usually a shining lighht upon everyone else's spirit before my own and you have enlightened my spirit with this write as before I read this I had read a write from another friend that for some unknown reason brought me to tears. many loving blessings always xxxx

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