ice clouds
disperse moonlight
the grass crunches
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hey - so cool of you to read these writes -
and comment -
you are my writing buddy -
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Very nice Haiku. I only tried this form few times. I enjoy reading it but I have hard time counting syllables which may sound silly
. great job again
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Great emotion conveyed in such few words. Can't wait to read more...
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it seems as if you really have studied up on that "haiku writing"
. Personally it is one of my very favorite forms , but there is so much controversy re that form [as syllables do not exist in Japanese]There are so many so-called experts on this site , as well as in other sources [books]"the art of haiku". i would love to talk to Basho himself one time....wonder if he could speak from the grave
? But I really do like this........the ice cloud description and then the last line of grass crunching, makes me want to grab my snowboots and go for a walk......5am..naaaaaa, a bit too early [might get a few more zzzzzzz's instead. Have a great Sunday,
reenie
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