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Saturation Point.

Umbrella shelter,
sucked into a tulip shape,
as I am deluged.

A contest entry

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    LOL hasn't this happened to us all at some stage, I love the 'outside the box' thinking on this one, goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • azure85 gold member
    November 1, 2007

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    Umbrella shelter,
    sucked into a tulip shape,
    as I am deluged.

    Oh, my goodness! A delightful rainy day haiku, I loved the L2 alot! Well done, thank you so much.


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Interesting! I guess you are truly saturated with the flood of drops. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain