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Internal Struggle of Irrationality....

Invasion of a spotless heart
Indents of unforgettable tribulation
Tears of vulnerable anguish
Selfish words of impaling disfigurement
Self-induced incarceration
Inability to appreciate affection
Forced into perpetual torture of the mind
Trapped to you involuntarily
Paranoia of my own intentions
Self-inflicted misery
Irrationality taken advantage of
Illuminating my insecurities
Prediction of my own downfall
Scrambled heart beats haunt me
Tried to push, but fell farther
Soggy eyes tell the story
Time has yet to heal
Exploited feelings
Unrelenting guilt
Distrust of my own heart
Distrust of my own fidelity

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  • MysteriousMoonlight
    December 4, 2007
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    Removing to close this contest. please enter in other contest

  • MysteriousMoonlight
    December 4, 2007
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    I'm sorry but could you please re enter this poem in a new contest i am holding because of some error made this contest will be shut down a new one will be started same type so don't change the poem please!

  • MysteriousMoonlight
    November 9, 2007

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    Wow!Lots of emotion!!!You have a good vocabulary alot of these words i have never heard used in a poem!Good Luck!