Oh my love
you are an uncomplicated gentlewoman
making love with me in traditional forms
yet, let me summarize you the accuracy
about the outcome of your halfway adoration
since after your love making
when you are elsewhere in your general work
you subsist in my comprehension
evincing all your love making configurations one by one
actuating me at surprises
Oh my love...
Author notes
1. Romantic love poem
A contest entry
- catch me in the DARKness if you can by theDARK1.
337 points, ended November 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I loved this. It was beautiful and full of feeling. Keep writing and good luck.
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lol....interesting take on the prompt...thanks for entering.
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Merely the remembrance of our lovemaking arouses my desire for you, oh my love...this is how I read this piece. Beautifully rendered, good luck in the contest. Peace, rhonda
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Excellent job! You capture the lingering effect of the night before better than I have ever seen it done! This is just terrific! I read it four times already!!
Good luck in the contest!
Sheryl
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excellent take on the picture(s) at hand. love the flow and the story behind it all. sweet entry, DARK.
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good one!
i like the unique narration and choice of words.
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good
I feel that you have a wonderful relationship with your loved one -
well......
i most certainly would have never gained this poem from the picture but that is what makes these prompt contests so interesting. everyone comes up with something so completely different. thank you for sharing this with me and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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