This is the time for a scary day,
shouting things like "Hurray, Hurray!"
All I want, though, is a chance to say:
"It's time for some movies, not time to lay,"
to my bestfriend/girlfriend, who laughs, and says:
"You have no idea what you're getting yourself into."
We both climb in my car, heading to the market,
wondering over and over if anyone,
and anything could be there to pick out,
our costumes must be amazing or I'd go insane.
I love a wicked costume and I have a big brain,
so it shouldn't be hard to think of a costume,
now, should it, now?
Happy things, crazy adventures,
afterall, we're always together,
looking after one another,
loving and caring for one another, too,
open your heart and realize this
when you look inside yourself again,
everyone makes mistakes,
everyone should forgive themselves,
nothing can stop a person if they try hard enough.
Kissing you is the most
delicious thing there is.
I love the taste of your lips,
as your mouth wraps around mine,
tightly smooching, kissing roughly.
Oh, yes, this is just so great.
And it's happening at the right time!
Leaves start to fall,
everyone runs wild,
afterall, it's strange,
very strange indeed,
everyone is sane and fine,
such the leaves are falling.
But the leaves are falling because of Halloween.
In two hours, the ghosts and demons will return.
They will slash people up, eat them alive,
drink them of their blood,
as they push them into the mud,
But for now, we're fine,
as long as we love each other.
And right now, we love each other.
Author notes
I hope that this entry for your contest is everything that you wanted. I tried my best to fit a couple small acrostics inside a normal poem/story. I hope that you enjoy the mixture.
I CHOSE OPTION #1
A contest entry
- * H a p p y H a l l o w e e n ! * by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended November 1, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope you just tell me what you think...okay?
Comments
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Such a tender piece, Nathaniel, and I like that it centered around Halloween. Wow... I totally like it when you write about love, especially:
Kissing you is the most
delicious thing there is.
I love the taste of your lips,
as your mouth wraps around mine,
tightly smooching, kissing roughly.
Oh, yes, this is just so great.
And it's happening at the right time!
SO my favorite verse. I totally love it. Nathaniel, you are totally awesome. -
I love how you described love. Love is my fave topic to write about! Yay! Extra props to you! But, I didn't understand in some stanzas. Good job and good luck!
Jackie
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very nice brother
love ya
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