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Out of Hand

i'm chained like you wanted
my master, i'm yours always
i just want to please you
tell me what i can do, please

i look in confusion
as you hold up a blade
pressing the coldness
right between my breasts

i close my eyes
feel a hint of pain
but it feels so good
i never want this to end

i can feel your hand
between my legs
i can't help but groan
for i want this so badly

you gag me unsurprisingly
and my groans distract you
but you also blindfold me
yet you love to see my eyes

i feel your entire hand
slide into me slowly
it hurts so much i cry

you ignore my tears
and feel around inside me
and you grip me from the inside

i feel you cut and pull
i'm scared, but you don't stop
as you pull my insides out

you cut and rip them apart
right in front of my eyes
blood splattering all around

you do not hesitate
instead, you position yourself
and masturbate over my organs

you make me cry as your cock slams in
i cry and pretend that this
will soon, if not now, end

i want out
i'm scared
i want out

you turn your dark eyes to me
and fear runs through me again
you cut my breasts off quickly

i watch my breasts
as they fall to the floor
shaking madly, i scream

you call me a whore
knocking me on the ground
i scream loud, slowing dying now

you watch me suffer
you enjoy the pain
as i forever bleed again

i think that you are
one fucking screwed up fuck
nothing that i would want to fuck

i hate the way you
smile when you cut
violently cutting me up

a raging lunatic
is what you are
i bleed forever

i scream but the gag muffles it
i want someone to help me, to save me
i'll obey you, promise me you'll stop

you don't stop
you watch me
as i bleed to death

i bleed forever more
bleeding on the floor
already dead

Author notes

So Strange

I hope that you enjoy this redo of your poem, Sinead. I tried my best to make you hate the poem more than your original piece, so here you go.

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  • Whispered.Screams
    January 18, 2008

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    I would do that to my ex girlfriend (though i dont really have a dick so that would be a catch) but you get the idea....mind if i send this to her? lol


  • Lady Australis silver member
    October 27, 2007
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    oh wow