Outside this door
two eternities wait...
one eternity offers temporary joy, peace, love
many roads lead to her door
she entices her victims into the fire of wickedness
while she wipes her lips with innocence
many she has won and conquered
many perish in her hands even now
the other eternity offers love unconditional,
everlasting
joy unspeakable, peace beyond understanding
only one road leads to this Door
only one Key opens it
Go ahead, it's your decision....
Will you turn the Key?
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You challenge us so effectively with the two choices...Gifted as always in what you choose for a topic....This is powerful!
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your poem explain so well that we can make decisions good or bad. thanks for an awesome read it was really great!
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Everything is choice.
There are those that think they are the only ones with choice. But God lets us have those choice and you have written a poem that explains we can make them. -
Wow...a thought provoking piece! Excellent rhythm and flow, your lines draw us in and your thoughts...linger with us long after the read. Well done! Always a pleasure to read your work
~Tia
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This was an entry in a pic contest. It wasn't an easy one to come up with. Thanks Tia for reading it.
GBY
SilverButterfly
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still love this...
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Thanks Tammy!
GBY
SilverButterfly
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wow...beautiful butterfly...
this is simply divine...
your poetry is a blessing to all who witness your faith!
and I know that the welcome mat into eternity will wear your precious footprints...
and behind you will be those of us wise enough to follow in your example...
you are a true example of faith and His love!
Blessings! Tammy
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thank you again Tammy You also, are a very giving person. I can tell by the way you freely send wonderful, uplifting comments to me and many others here on AP, to encourage us You make us all smile when we get to read them. thank you so much for your sweet, sweet heart!!!!
GBY
SilverButterfly
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Two doors of life and yet one choice...Will it be the now with all its glory are the ever-lasting happiness with our Creator
...Good verses evil...Excellent my friend...Thank you so much for thought
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I see many ways in which one could decipher here depending on what one's point of view is. I could see this relating to a choice made in follow the path of righteousness, or religion or following the way of the world and all it's evils. On the other hand, I also see this as one being faced with choices, choices that slap us in the face every time we awaken to a new day. You did a great job here. Good luck in your contest.
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JLG thank you for commenting on"Turn Of The Key".you're very kind and I appreciate that
GBY
Silverbutterfly
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Oh. This is a pretty interesting poem that you have going on here. I thought the picture was intriguing and I could see why it would inspire you. It got me thinking too. I liked how you made it about love and choices. I agree that there are a lot of roads a person can choose to go down and you have to be careful of what you choose. I think that you've done a good job of expressing that.
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Wonderfully thought provoking. The struggles with ones self often lead down many bumpy roads, before one reach peace and redemption.
Excellent write.
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VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING
The eternal struggle of man to choose right or wrong, heaven or hell. Very good poem. Ms. Morrow
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An elegant take on an interesting picture prompt. The options are ours I guess whatever way we observe life and death. Thank you so much for sharing this piece.
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thnak you my friend for the very kind comment!!
SilverButterfly
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thank you. no I haven't read it but I've heard of it
Oh thanks for the comment Granny! Just a simple write a little while back. Glad you commentThanks again.
GBY
SilverButterfly
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I like the message here.. I rarely or maybe the first time to see a write with this message. The two roads of life.
Do you know the poem The Path not Taken?
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