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Just One Pill [Alice's Wonderland]

Arch your back;
Stick a needle in your eye.
Give me your apple,
Your sweet cherry pie.

Whisper your surrender,
Into the heel of my boots.
Just one pill,
Is all that it took.


Alice,Alice,where are you now?
Into the Wonderland you'll give way to your fixated bow.


Claw into the skin;
Unleash your bridal lust.
Just like a baby's lullaby,
Tell me your hush hushs.

Arch again and lick my boots,
Tonight babe,just one pill is all it took.
Try to escape the silken cuffs amongst your wrists;
Arouse me more as you begin your screams and twists.


Alice,Alice,where do you hide?
Don't worry my love,you'll never go untied.


Whipping harder now;
Can you take the pain of it all?
In this bizarre limbo of lust,
How much more does this hand have to thrust?

Insert the gag,
You'll never scream again.
Against your will,
Here's where I'll mount you.


Alice,Alice,blindedfolded by my lacy restraints.
Give me your will power pulled upon leathery constraints.


Surrender your pleasure;
Your screams of more and forever!
Just one pill,
Wasn't exactly enough.

Slowing down the pulse,
Your heart becomes entwined with mine.
Upon our reflection in the mirror,
Your bittersweet muse is nothing but a whine.


Alice,Alice,have you had enough?
The hot pants of more tell me you always liked it rough.

Author notes

I was listening to Dead or Alive's "You Spin Me Round" when this idea shot through me. HAHA,I guess that just goes to show how that song interests me! XD
That,and I had Alice in Wonderland in mind after a conversation with one of my friends.

That,and I've been craving to write an erotica poem as of late. So viola~!
Hoorah for erotic Alice in Wonderland poems xD

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  • I love it and the whole alice in wonderland thimg i would never thought of it awsome poeam!!!


  • TheDemonEve
    November 1, 2008

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    I must say that now every time I watch that film, there will be a growing moisture in my undies! XD Well done.

  • arden
    November 19, 2007
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    always did like alice in wonderland. i must confess i dinna think that i will ever watch it quite the same way now. och, tis subtle and intoxicateing, your weave... and pulss in... suddenly at a line, i am the one bounded, and realy, i dinna want out. i think, i will need to keep an eye on ye... simply facinateing.

    arden


  • volcaniclastic
    November 4, 2007
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    Amazing.

    This is definately an interesting twist to a classic story. Actually, it made me think of a girlfriend of mine - she was 'Malice in wonderland' for halloween. I may have to keep track of you, I like the way you write.

    I just 'rejoined' - my old alais is Kater - but I decided its time for a new face. I'll be posting my own works shortly! (I hope!)


    • Tekno Suicide
      November 5, 2007
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      Well,I hope I can please later on! :3

      I may have to keep track of you as well.

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