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Lap Seering Lust

Silhouette provoking uncontrollable hunger of burning lust
urgent thoughts her lap pressing my pumping thrust
penetrating lubricous slippery pink bouncing wiggling spill
strong hands gripping desperate hips needing their fill.

 

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    love the rhyme and rhythem here
    you did a great job.

    thank you very much for this my friend.

    Riftkin


  • stavykm gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Missed the Contest

    Ok this was a bit much for me. Very descriptive though and I'm glad it was a cartoon picture. lol Lap Seering Lust, I'd say so, and the first line Silhouette provoking uncontrollaable hunger of burning lust and the last line strong hands gripping desperate hips needing their fill. Powerful sex here! stavykm


  • dustookie2
    October 28, 2007
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  • Lady Dragonwyck
    October 27, 2007
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    very descriptive -- good write -- good luck in this contest....

    Lady Dragonwyck