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[ awake yet asleep ]

Awake, yet asleep.
Alive, yet dead.
All I wish right now,
is that I could go back to bed.

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NoShameUpInMyGame

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  • takemypainaway
    March 11, 2008

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    very funny i like this

    so very clever

    nice write enjoed the loseness

    thank you for entering!!

    **kat


  • Rev Alimae gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    Ok, that one made me laugh. I do not know why, may hap due to a really long day, but that one brought a smile to my face.


  • BrokenDarkAngel
    February 13, 2008
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    i love it. this is like how i feel like every day. very good. love it again


  • Melissa Burns
    December 9, 2007

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    I can relate to this poem - you have no idea I have insomia - and a poem dedicated to it to, but at least it gives us something to write about Nice


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 24, 2007
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    Interesting. *Yawns* Now I need a bed. Thanks a bunch for this very cute read. Keep it up.

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