feel my fingertips
as they tease you.
smirk, and
realize the ease
in which I please you
hold my hands
or my hair
and
let my tongue
twist and turn
in you
as I ignite
a flame in you.
tempting.
yearning you
to let me learn
the outs and
ins of you
allow my lips to lust yours.
trust me, as I part you.
Close your eyes,
bite your lips; as
my hips thrust you.
Pressure is pleasure.
Close your eyes
and realize the ease
in which I please you
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, I love the rhyme here... so appropriate. It adds that extra flare. The tone and flow of your words create the perfect aspect of sensuality. Amazing work. Umm, one question: "as I ignite
a burn in you."
Is it supposed to be "a burn in you" or what about "and burn in you." Actually it would sound wonderful if you said "as I ignite, burn in you"
Just my two cents... But just let me tell you that this poem is phenomenal, and needs no help from me.
cheers
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