The cat on the couch
Watches me
Evaluates me.
Her eyes are wisdom
In action
They never blink
Always the same
Always watching.
She yawns
But still she is focused
On me
And my thoughts.
The cat is
There
The cat is
Watching
The cat is
Wise.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ At this moment.... by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended November 11, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP Book Contest: Get Published! (Last Chance!) by tinuelena.
1200 points, ended December 12, 2007, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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:)) I love this! This is a true "in the moment piece". I can see it so clearly. Excellent job on this one. It's priceless and so very true! HA!
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You're only 11? Are you sure?
A nicely written poem and a little eerie...your cat sounds more like a human than an animal...maybe that's you dad keeping an eye on you and not your cat.
A nicely written poem.
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I like it
and you know how to spell! You've summed up the essence of a cat and done it well. Good luck on the contest.
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