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The Core

Beings stripped and salted.
No more black and white exhaulting.
Covered only by the grey.

Ancestors many are truly sorrowful.
For today we've not stuck to our guns.
Governments societies have taken over our motions.
We could no longer hold onto our will.
Survival we try unfortunately it's unfulfilled.
We knew we had to suffer through your reign.
Holding on believeing peace will be upon us again.

Black and white all turned into grey
Covered by the shade you'll be okay

So much preaching about our pain.
Hold on stay sane.
We all know it's time for our gain.
Maintain your hearts struggles and strains.
Move forward saddle up.
Ride through the plains.
The ALMIGHTY has the last word no matter what the insane may claim. 
 
Remember black and white all turned to grey.
When your covered by the shade you'll be okay.

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I watched Sitting Bull today.

The Core

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    This was a well written poem, and full of truth. I like your conception of the colours black and white with grey. It really gives depth to your poem.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck in my contest


  • Musimwa
    March 12, 2008

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    great

    I love this one. It is a flowing piece. Keep this up sissy. It has been a long time since i last read your pieces. Great day. Be blessed.


    • quaneefah
      March 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much please do check out some more and let me know which ones you like. I will send in an e-mail 2 for you to use. let me know if you agree.Peace and blessing my brother.

  • surreal realist
    November 17, 2007
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    Really, really inspiring.


    • quaneefah
      November 18, 2007
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      Thank You

      Been away for a while but the jewels never get broken just have to bring them to the light. A pleasure my friend. Peace and blessings as always.

  • quaneefah
    October 28, 2007
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    Thank You! Thank You!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Great rhymes and content here. You are right the ALMIGHTY does have the last word and all the ignorant people of ALL RACES who spread hate and try to oppress will have their day in judgment from the ALMIGHTY!!! Thanks for sharing and it is nice to see a new post from you as well!!!!Again, great job!!!~~Toni~~

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