so where do i begin until it ends
so where do i start until it bends
so where do i go until i desend
so wait
so far to find it
so far to bind it
so far to hide it
so look
so wait little one
so far to look
into the night
A contest entry
- May the best poem win. by cover fire hero.
600 points, ended April 28, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good use of repitition. Thanks for entering my contest and sharing!
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this is not quit what we are looking for to go in the book, but please feel free to submit another before the end of the contest.
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Well jen, lovely work on this one. God knows it's the most complez one you've written so far, their usually pretty up front with the meanings. This one you have to dig for. Great job and keep it up.
ur lil big sis,
jan
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i do not know what this means but i like it, good work. it is simple but not dull. it is almost a riddle, do you have the anwser, and if you do let me know.
your fan shadow of the void.
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life death etrnately
its what i thought before my mate(husband) changed me to a vampire. i had thought all in my head if i could die if it did not work right...its hard to hide being a vampire in a crowed of ppl so i have to hide it then i find it late at night when my thirst is unbarable. the last one few lines is me look at my futre in the night look deep in to my being. i think that what my riddle was try to say i just wrote it out of noe where i realy never thouth about it thill know any way THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT!!!!!!
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ignor this comment of mine the one before this one it all wrong .VERY WRONG its stupid lol
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