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[ I'm about to break ]

I'm about to break
this pain is too hard to take
I can't hold on
much longer
I need to let go
to let it all out
I want to scream
to yell so loud
yell so much my lungs will burn
If I feel one more thing of pain
I'm gonna explode
My emotional span is that of a teaspoon
I'm about to BREAK!

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 17, 2008
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    Such raw emotion you portray here. I think that many people have felt this way in their lives. Screaming into a pillow is good. Or climbing a hill and letting it all out. I can't do that anymore, because I always end up with the worst sore throat; but it helped a little when I was young. I hope that you are feeling better.