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He makes me sleep at night.

He makes me sleep at night by his gentle touch.

He kisses me like a good night kiss.

His face is such a gentle touch.

Good night my sweet little boy.

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  • LuchiaNanami
    February 28, 2008
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    Aww..

    That's SOOOO cute! I love it! It's like your true love is making you happy enough to sleep through.


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 17, 2008
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    Adorable write...

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    this is a precious poem of the love of a baby or even a little brother to some thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love always


  • SparklingMoonlight
    December 19, 2007
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    AWWW

    This is so sweet and cute and cuddly!! Good job!


  • Felissa
    November 3, 2007
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    Really sweet and succinct.


  • Mizuki wolf
    October 29, 2007

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    AWWWW this is so cute it makes perfect sense and it's short and to the point. gotta give ya credit for that.

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