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Rock Me October

Before the sun hatched the horizon
October sailed through my window
on the last stream of summer’s breeze.
Rock me, October, in your cradle of color;
deliver me into autumn dreams.
Golden October gathers bouquets
of bronze mums and butterscotch daisies.

Crisp Libran caress creates goose flesh
causing me to nestle closer
to the warmth by my side.
Fingers fan through strands
of harvest wheat.
The universe exists
in the ring of his embrace; 
all my desires are a pulse away.
faithful October flows through me;
aborning contentment breathed deeply.

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  • Runawaytrain
    January 8

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    You have some nice fall images in this. I'm a libra too.

    I love this line:

    Rock me, October, in your cradle of color


  • line shakes
    October 27, 2007

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    excellent

    excellent!!! awesome!! beautiful!!! i have no words to actually tell you how good this poem is. it is brilliant!!! i love your choices of words, it made october so lovely, like a beautiful woman or a gentleman. the beauty of nature is well explained here. this is really a good poem. and i must say you are very talented. i am in awe. happy october.