rainy morning
through the crown of a walnut
a fleck of blue
Author notes
Walnuts aren't just nuts
(For my friends from America who don't usually see the trees)
A contest entry
- Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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INteresting take on the rain from someone outside America lol, goodluck in this contest
Karen -
Beautiful and unique observation...very nice!All the best!
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An interesting take how walnuts can blend with the Rain. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!
Ted E
PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain
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rainy morning
through the crown of a walnut
a fleck of blue
Very nice haiku, with the sky clearing over the tree. Great set of images, thank you so much.
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now,that interprets the kernel so abruptly that the hardness of that is soaked in all this softening process called damp!
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