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Falling Rain

From her lips
pools of thought drizzle
into moist droplets

A contest entry

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    January 17, 2008
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    Wanted to give you Congrats on the HM:Ted E


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    January 13, 2008
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    A gorgeous && simple piece...

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    December 29, 2007
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    I do love the "rain" and you know as I have commented on this one before I love it as well. Thank you for adding it to the tribute hosted by the two ladies. Good luck in the contest.

    Ted E


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 28, 2007

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    well done as well as sensually intoxicating with rejoicing relevence from within a gentle spring rain. many blessings always and thank you for entering xx

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Wonderful piece here, I do love the thoughts and images this one created for me, the reader.. well done and goodluck in this contest

    Karen

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    To taste the rain is a sweet pleasure indeed. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain


  • azure85 gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    From her lips
    pools of thought drizzle
    into moist droplets

    Very nice rainy day haiku, a delight to read!

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