Now I have the chance to say,
Exactly what I want to say,
I want no interuptions,
Or for you to say a word.
It's something that's been on my mind,
For forever and a day,
It's time I said it to you,
Even though you may decide to laugh.
I've known you for a little over a year,
Being with you feels so right,
And I've never felt so close,
To any other individual.
I've fallen so far for you,
And yet you've hardly really noticed,
It's time for you to understand,
Just how much I adore you.
I feel my butterflies start to twitch,
When I get a glance of you,
And this feeling inside of me,
Can never be pushed aside.
I love the way you look at me,
I love the way you walk,
I love how you love to talk,
And I love how you are around me.
I adore your smile,
I love your beautiful blue eyes,
And your soft curly brown hair,
Even your laugh which sounds so unique.
I've known this for longer that I'd like to admit,
But haven't had enough courage to say,
I'm so in love with you,
And I'm hoping you love me too.
Author notes
hope you like this, I spent a long time in writing this and I've tried to be as honest as possible. xx
Round 2 (204 from round 1) sorry, things have been a little hectic at home and I forgot! thanks and happy judging
cupid - option 2
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Comments
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that is everything i had felt for my last ex. you expressed it so well.
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Sorry, nice, but too long.
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This is a really nice piece of writing.
"I feel my butterflies start to twitch,
When I get a glance of you,
And this feeling inside of me,
Can never be pushed aside."
I love those lines.
Thank you very much for entering.. I'm sorry I have to take this out of my contest though. I forgot to click the no PW button, and it wouldn't be fair to leave your PW in. Sorry about that.
It is a great piece, and I'm really pleased I had the chance to read it Well done x
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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This is incredibly sweet.
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this is very sweet.strong on love and very beautiful.it doesnt really fit my contest though as i am with the person,have been for a year,and i know he loves me.seems like you didnt read anything i wrote.
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very beautiful
trust me I know how you feel. And I know others that have this problem right now. I hope everything works out.
Best of luck
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this is really touching, and i know how you feel...
though i dont have enough courage to tell Him how I feel.....
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well I actually told him last week, and I near enough used this poem, I didn't read it out, but I remebered certain areas of it and used them where appropriate. He was speechless for once in his life! Always keep your chin up and have faith. I was terrified but in the end I knew I couldn't keep it from him and he had the right to know, seeing as it does involve him good luck and thanks for your lovely comment x x x
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I must say that I am so sorry but I am very unsure how this relates in any way to option number two!...?..."2) Write me a poem about your opinion on the following eternal question:
What came first the chicken or the egg!"
If in your opinion it does can you please message me so that I may better understand your thought process in the connection between the two. Thanks so much! And Good luck.
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option1 answer machine message xxx
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This is a very sweet and honest poem. It takes a lot of courage to confess your love this way, especially when he seems to not have the smallest clue about what you feel. I liked how you described what you're feeling directly and with simple words...I usually like a more subtle approach in love poems, but here this raw honest expression works very powerful.
Thank you very much for your entry! And I'd like you to be my AP sis x
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i have had this feling alot and it tackes a lot of courage to tell the one u love/like the truth that u realy love them and have falling deep for them. This is very honiset and u did a greart job on it i hope u said this to the on u loved or read this i bet he/she was moved by this (sorry i dont know if u are a girl or guy sorry) anyway hope the best of luck and dont be afriend to be honest thats what poetry is all about to be anest and let ur feeling and true words come out --great work keep it up
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this is really good and super sweet-this is something i have felt before-great job
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This is a really nice piece of writing, and I know it is something I can definitely relate to Well done and thankyou for entering x
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In a word: endearing; well done.
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thank you!!
xx
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I can sooooo relate to this......Wonderful write!!!
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Aww, this was great! haha, and I really like how it starts out like, sit down, be quiet, and listen--(I'm a sucker for that determined, 'Dammit such and such, can't you see that I love you,' thing. I think it's cus I'm Irish.} Anyway, the sentiment was really great, a very sweet poem. I like when you talk about what you like about the person--the little details make everything seem stronger. Also, I like how it was arranged like a rhyming poem, but read like something you would actually sit down and tell a person. Excellent work, good luck in my contest.
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well it was kinda what I had to do when I did tell him, omg! Some blokes are just so bloody awkward! thanks for your lovely comment xx
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I love the way it began... it made me anxious to read more. Good job!
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very beautiful poem very well worth of a trophy i am just sorry i could not award everyone
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how wonderful, poem bleed from within beautiful good luck in the contest
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beautiful poem! I really hope it turned out well
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This is a very beautiful poem. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for blessing me with the chance to read this and the rest of the AP community. You did a wonderful job with this. I could feel every stanza. God bless you in all that you do and all that you write and good luck to you and this poem in my contest and congrats on winning bronze with this. This is a truly beautiful and remarkable poem. I love it.
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This was a wonderful entry in the contest
Very Beautiful Writing
Best of luck to you *grin
delila
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not really what i was looking for along the line of one year option but never mind. i should have been more specific. very nice poem. the stanzas and emotion are great. thank you for entering and good luck
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This is a very beautiful poem. I love it. I can picture the picture this poem paints so much. It has truly moved me. I ope you keep up the good wonder and good luck to you and this contest.
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please add your authors name thank you
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from the heart and unique, this is a great write.
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this poem is wonderful. it was definetely well written and i enjoyed it very much. good poem
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thank you! x
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This is just beautiful, and a most lovely affirmation of love, thank you for your entry, Josephine
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thank you so much for my first bronze. made me smile to log in to find a new trophy. thanks again
Heather-Grace xx
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