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To Linger Inside Her Shadow~






I found her syllables
when waves splashed my lashes.

There was tide
in the pit of my stomach
leaving underlying meaning
in places of the soul, uncharted.

I discovered humble hope
blooming from harsh reality
and my eyes were enchanted,

blushing at the feel of feathered notions
that I was afraid to face.

I saw love painted blue
and my fairytales faded
blossoming into still life art.

Her poetry stole my heart
somewhere by the riverside.







~

Author notes

The very first poem I read of Carol's is not posted
"Riverside Louis Never misses a funeral" but I am also inspired by this collection by her

http://allpoetry.com/list/44790-Riverside-Louis

I am a big fan of this collection which will be coming soon, and she did choose a poem I wrote to be included on the back of the book which was a great honor!

She is a wonderful friend and a brilliant poet!

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  • FindingFaith
    October 27, 2007

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    This is simply beautiful. Her poetry does have a way, as does yours.


  • Frozentearz
    October 27, 2007

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    This was simply beautiful and a great tribute to her,
    she is an amazing perons with deep and amazing thoughts, Truly she will be blessed by this,
    Many blessings to the both of you.
    Frozentearz


  • tara wilson gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    This is excellent, Lynda, the whole poem is amazing...
    "I saw love painted blue
    and my fairytales faded
    blossoming into still life art.

    Her poetry stole my heart
    somewhere by the riverside."

    Beautiful poetry


  • penman gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    Excellent

    Awww, this is so wonderful. A terrific tribute to a great lady and poet. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    a wonderful tribute to one of my favorite writers, speaks also to the person, caring is not required of us, it is always a gift and she has done this over and over...given the gift of caring to so many... wonderful...PK


  • kaibab silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Yes this is Carol Native soul to such a heaven...she is so honored here in you fragrant words of gratitude...beautiful angel poet


    • poet2angels gold member
      October 27, 2007
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      well , it would be difficult to do her justice TY, my friend


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 27, 2007
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    Oh you are so totally awesome..I know Louis would love you too.....and that, my friend, is the greatest of compliments. bless your heart..you are a cherished friend.


    • Night Hope gold member
      October 27, 2007
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      "Her poetry stole my heart
      somewhere by the riverside."

      Mine, too. She's kept it safe for about 3 years now. Carol is simply a humble, honorable holy woman, her pen guided by things we cannot yet see...but her words make us aware of their presence, nevertheless. Beautiful tribute, Lynda. She deserves every kind word, every homage she may receive. Most of all, she is truly a good, kind, soulful person who really does care. Wanda

      • CarolDesjarlais silver member
        October 27, 2007

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        oh, how I needed to hear this...and read this poem...again. It succors me...comforts me...and makes me want to be a better person that will stand true to what I know to be truth.


    • poet2angels gold member
      October 27, 2007
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