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Music of Heaven

song of the angels
echo softly in wet verse
music in each tear

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Music in each tear, I do love this line... you have captured such sadness but beauty within these few lines... well done and goodluck

    Karen


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    A lovely take on rain drops. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain


  • azure85 gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    song of the angels
    echo softly in wet verse
    music in each tear

    A rainy day haiku, with the angel's song in each drop. Thank you for a beautiful haiku.


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 27, 2007

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    If they take our sorrows from us then I guess their song would be wet verse. I hope one day to hear the music of heaven...but I can wait. Nicely done.


  • Tercil gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    This is heaven sent and spell binding. Lovely little haiku!

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