Dancing hands,
salivating lips,
plunging fingers,
gyrating hips.
Gasps, moans,
sensual groans,
friction builds,
loss of will.
Hardened nipples,
heartbeat triples,
wetness dripping,
hands gripping.
Lusts culmination,
final gyration,
Orgasm.
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Love you Tory
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A contest entry
- can you do it in under 30 words (ADULT) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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congradulations scott this was hot honey we kicked ass dammit the essence came in and took over the partay baybae wooo
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Oh now this is just perfect
you did a wonderful job here
thank you for entering my contest
Riftkin

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woah dad this was a deff adult write but was wonderfully written with vivid imagery
well done and best of luck

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Great job on this.
Im sure its enjoyed by many
Good luck
Tory

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I LOVE IT!!! LOL it made me smile.lol

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Wow. Really a wonderful take on the picture, my friend, and, I must say, a really fast paced piece that really did make me think of a quickie. All the best.
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