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Dance with me

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Dancing hands,
salivating lips,
plunging fingers,
gyrating hips.

Gasps, moans,
sensual groans,
friction builds,
loss of will.

Hardened nipples,
heartbeat triples,
wetness dripping,
hands gripping.

Lusts culmination,
final gyration,
Orgasm.

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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 28, 2007

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    congradulations scott this was hot honey we kicked ass dammit the essence came in and took over the partay baybae wooo

    muah...


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Oh now this is just perfect
    you did a wonderful job here
    thank you for entering my contest

    Riftkin


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    woah dad this was a deff adult write but was wonderfully written with vivid imagery
    well done and best of luck


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    Great job on this.
    Im sure its enjoyed by many

    Good luck
    Tory


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    October 27, 2007
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    I LOVE IT!!! LOL it made me smile.lol


  • Lady Eventide
    October 27, 2007

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    Wow. Really a wonderful take on the picture, my friend, and, I must say, a really fast paced piece that really did make me think of a quickie. All the best.

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