autumn...
pockmarks on the face
of Superior
A contest entry
- Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Opinions?
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This is a great haiku, one that makes the reader think a little, that's what I love, goodluck in the contest
Karen -
Very nice image of drops falling over a large body of water. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!
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autumn...
pockmarks on the face
of Superior
Very nice haiku, you can see the images on the Lake itself. Thank you for a good rainy day haiku.
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i love the layers ... the imagery is great as is the underlying psychology i find here ... rain on the lake and pockmark (changes/lines/wrinkles/marks) on an autumn (becoming of an age) face -and Superior is perfect - nicely done ! >>> Gina
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Wonderful haiku and so like a rainy day in autumn--good luck in the contest!
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