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sudden shower

sudden shower
forgot my umbrella
dripping dude

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Heheh this one made me laugh, but to drip dude is fun, to feel the rain on your skin, well done and goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • ronnica
    November 3, 2007
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    Its always good to know you have one some-where though. This made me smile,


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    That was funny. I would be a dripping Bare and would be happy about it though. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain


  • azure85 gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    sudden shower
    forgot my umbrella
    dripping dude

    LOL, this is cute-that's what happens when we run out without the umbrella. Thank you for a great rainy day haiku.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 27, 2007
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    Another wonderful haiku by Billbard with humor that I so enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

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