Look but don’t touch
Sit back and enjoy
Smell the sex from my pussy
As I seduce your hard cock
Imagine me on it
Driving you insane all night long
Author notes
Picture Prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- can you do it in under 30 words (ADULT) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You're very straight and to the point. I like that. Great write.
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Once again... so vivid and blunt... i love this type of write... there are no guesses... it's just Wow in the face!! yummy!
becca
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Real good and real nasty!!!!
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naughty naughty naughty
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Very naughty and I just love
the sarcasm!
congrats on the silver
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Well done
I realise why I didn't do better than 5th, it wasn't dirty enough, but this isn't subtle and full marks to you for giving the host what she wanted, a full on rendition of what yearning hard core is. It is very noble of you to write like this, and for the benefit of my fans, I am unable to reach the heights you've obtained, and all in 6 lines, how hard do I make even a honorary win. Yes, I'm enviously admiring you for this write, so in future, I will avoid these like the plague and the host, Very well done, and compared with the 'gold' poem, this should have done it. Congratulations on your silver.
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Well done to grab the Silver J-man, looks like Essence got the hat trick on this contest. Good one...Scott
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LMAO! hey you starting to put your back in to it J this was well worth gold to be honest i would swap you out for this one this was fabolous honey
muah..
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Love this one, for it is along the lines
of pure pleasure and fun.
Riftkin
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This is a good passionate write which I liked a lot. Good luck.
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Ha.
You entered this contest, too? Hey! Long time no see.
Great work you've done here. Enjoy your erotic stuff all the time...it's always fun. Good job.
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