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A Love Storm(((( The Best of Spoken Word))))

A Love Storm

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

My story begins in rain drops as

I sit by the post in hurting tears.

Remembering the clothe of all the years

I made him smile

And how he made me feel like heavens peace.

I am sitting on crates of wondering thoughts asking

My emotions why I made myself

pack up my suit case of love?

And just ran away.

As the trains of trust will be here soon to cast me away.

Did I leave him in a pond of tears wondering why he couldn’t

Heal me.? I am a storm of hurtful journey and I been through

A few hurricane storms.

See his love was so cotton soft

And his eyes spoke like a forecast

That predicted my life in beauty.

And the sunshine of cloudy days

Was so trusting like a mother

Bringing life marking her

New born in birth marks.

I am weeping in lost

Sanity because I am

Breaking down in river streams of

Beaut. Like he is really so impressive

As I look over the mountains of his heart

And see a ghost of love walking

Towards me. This man he is

The key of highways blues

Snapping the fingers of my heart as

The band of tears is sending me in

Nervous break down as concrete

Sounds. Paying me back in rebounds

Of I should die in self pity

Because when he loved me it was full time. I

Mean he really loved me like

I robbed his thoughts

And I took his ears drums of paying attention and

He spoke about me like a spirit cherishing God and

He took steps of pride and he walked in the name of my love

He will stare in my pond of eyes and just get totally soundless

And not blink.

I mean just listen

Listen,

Listen,

I will shed tears

For indefinite of time

Because I caused a storm

Of denying love

Do you see me trembling a withdrawal

Tell me admiring ears do you

See me shaking as

The lakes of love are breaking

In a hunger draught

He fought for my storms

And he stood in front of a bullet of death

And said I love her dear spirit like

I love my damn self

Just please speak to her heart for me

And tell her I have the table of love

And the waters of a tub

That suds in

Harmony

Like I will break down and fall to my knees

See it’s a storm pouring in my umbrella of mind

Because when he made love to me

I want you to feel

When he stroked me

He worked his hips slow

I mean so slow

I felt his flow of love like I cried like a baby crying lost in a field

Searching for my daddy

He’s a habit to me

Bringing on the field of growing cabbage

I salvaged all I had and packed up my suit case of idiot

And stood in the fool of my pride

And walked on my feet of crazy mad all up inside and walked

Down the streets of you know you want to go back as

I cried in discreet

I mean he loved me like when he massaged my feet .

He put his palms of soul in it

I am a woman of soul and when I sale you my love

Its not worth pennies you pawn shop owner

But do you see I am a woman worth millions on a dollar to gold

He fore told my tale

And so you see I am not for sale for your fan mail

O Lord I miss it

I mean

I miss the way

His finger tips swell every time he knew they where getting close to touching me

Holding me

caressing me

Matting me

In to a melody

Have you even listen to my blues

I am crying out to you

That I lost a love you

See

In a bad darkness called

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

 

Author notes

Love Storm
this is the heart of me as a writing artist
I gave you half of my best in this. This is in
spoken word form and to be honest I would love
to turn my house with this one i wish you guys could see how i work my crowd but this picture was inspired by my sweet loving Kapricia Miller thank you honey
so so much you feed my writing soul and that is love.

(1) Beaut- something outstanding: a fine or impressive thing

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Comments

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  • Damien 666
    September 15

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    "He worked his hips slow
    I mean so slow
    I felt his flow of love like I cried like a baby"

    ... i relate, obveously vice versa tho.. i was the flow of love lol
    in some term that is love
    i mean sex is sex but,
    gentle carressing, slow moving, full penetration heavy breathing and hardly breaking eye contact.
    its ultimate appreciation for the other.
    as humans, we cant push the boundaries much more and love may be as deep as it gets for us.
    thouroghly enjoyed this, thanx for your comment too by the way.
    kelvin


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      September 15
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      Lol damn! you have great imagination you took my piece on another drive lmao thanks anyway its more in another direction though _ Lady Enthralling

  • Ephiphany gold member
    February 26
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    I thought this was a new piece

    well it is, cause it's been a while since I last read it. Still very lovely.

    Lady♥
    • o yes honet very old i will send u a link to my newest hell have writers block dad working my brain now cant write crap

  • Mystal LaRose
    January 15

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    Good job this is a very interesting poem to many parts i like so i cant tell you exzactaly it is wonderful I am glad i seen this page and decided to investagate Wonderful job


  • johnswails
    January 4

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    This was very intense and sad. It's interesting how many times we are blessed with what we ask for and when we get it we sabotage it because we can't accept we are worthy of it. Anger is a lonely bed-fellow.

    I am a Spoken Word artist as well. What tours have you gone on?

    One Love,

    John

  • Skyee
    December 14, 2007

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    inspuratin is nice when you can right like this ma'am you are like no other wruter I have seen although I have just started to right. Im stil training.


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      December 14, 2007
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      thanks really dont deal with new writers because its some crazy people on line if my trust level feels your sense i would love to help you been writing since I was 11 spoken word artist going in to my 7th year so i guess you can say I am iight I will help you if available
  • Theambassador
    December 11, 2007
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    home

    You've touched the forbidden secrets of mine here my sweet LADY.
    Anyhow Thank you very much


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    Oh love this is great

    You ahve told a great love story here dearest

    I love the entire thing, you have a way with your words.

    Blessings love.


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      October 31, 2007
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      riftkin i love you honey thanks for stopping by
      its spoken word poetry i shall go write something lovely for your contest know i love you

  • Whenitefallz
    October 31, 2007

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    I am suddenly enamored, all over again. I try so hard not to recall love such as this, but you and my favorite ladies of poetry, make it so hard to ignore..
    One day I will return to scribing as this, what I know best.. But until then - -
    LOVED this - truly...
    Whenitefallz AKA Highness...


  • rose petal desires
    October 31, 2007

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    i want you to write more like this auntie you do such a excellent job with this spoken word stuff i cant wait until your collection of books start rolling in
    i will be sure to get your personal single take care of you

    your fam
    rose


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
    October 30, 2007
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    <

    you mean good luck in your contest
    i hope so honey have fun judging

  • AngelicSinz
    October 29, 2007

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    HYPNOTIC

    BUT I FEEL SO MUCH SADNESS FLOWING THRU THIS PIECE AND I CAN SEE THE YOOUR TEARS AS THE RAINDROPS IN HIS STORM

    . Rewarded 4


  • rainbow bi trinity
    October 28, 2007
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    the depths of passion that lays beneath your fingertips julia i have admired a lot of your writings but this the paticular piece that breaks your perfection so when the club going to get a piece of it?????? your falling off why???? is the big question


    xxxxfreakychic1000xxxxx

    . Rewarded 6


  • tomisb gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    I write for the stage. You know my work well enough to hear how it is set to sing. I can hear you ring the crowd, make them stop and listen with all they have. Good job.
    Love, Tom B.

    . Rewarded 4


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      October 27, 2007
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      yes indeed hon i love your work very very much thanks for stopping by
      juju

      i wish i could watch i think i would be evn more impressed

  • Ephiphany gold member
    October 27, 2007
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    Commenting again

    for the group

  • almostgone
    October 27, 2007
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    I can see you on stage now working this piece. Great flow and emotional outpour. Lovely write hon

  • darell silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Outstanding!

    Julia this was a spectacular out pouring of love.
    The sentiments and emotions of this sweetly tender
    write brings tears to one's heart. Thoughts of a
    first and true love serenades this melody of
    enchantment. I felt the ambrosial winds of love
    blowing all around me. So affectionate and sweet!
    A wonderful wonderful piece baby!

    . Rewarded 6


  • onesugar silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Wonderful

    JuJu I really enjoyed this

    I could imagine you speaking it as I was reading

    Very sad and emotional

    A pleasure to read

    Love ~sugar~

    . Rewarded 4


  • Ephiphany gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    Wonderful Lovie....

    You like the picture, yeyyyyy
    IT goes well with your Spoken Lyrics...Love
    keep doing you I will be here

    always,
    Lady

    . Rewarded 4


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      October 27, 2007
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      yes! did you read it thanks for the love to my writing soul you must new that i would love love this picture

  • Mykeee
    October 27, 2007

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    This did read like like spoken word. I think the only thing you could do to enhance this piece is put in the hesitations where you would hesitate while you are live. Great feel ~ Mykeee

    . Rewarded 4


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    This is wonderful my friend! A piece filled with so much emotions and imagery in it. I love the way that
    you wrote this. A real honest and sweet, yet sad write. Spoken Word is such a great way to express your thoughts and emotions. I am sure that you will do well with this one in this contest and wherever else it may take you in life. Thanks a lot for sharing this one here and good luck to you with it!




    Jeremy0826

    . Rewarded 8


  • kennethlaney
    October 27, 2007

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    Excellent poem

    A little long baby but it was interesting and told a good story as to why this lady is sitting im=n the rain. Would you be sitting in the rain like that for me? Love you baby.
    "BOO"

    . Rewarded 4


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling silver member
      October 27, 2007
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      thanks yes I would because when I love I love
      hard could you handle that?


      • kennethlaney
        October 27, 2007
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        You talk a good game baby, we'll see. I expect nothing less. Can you handle that?
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