Thunder announces
sky shedding beverage base
tipping chin to drink.
A contest entry
- Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely haiku here, you have stepped outside the box of just rainy days here, goodluck in your contest, you have a great entry here
Karen -
I really like this. It is quick and witty.
OK, so maybe there is too muc acid rain, but this haiku speaks volumes about the simplicity of life. Simplicity does not create the acid rain, but confusion does a good job.
This is lovely and has made me smile.
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It's not good to drink the rain. There's too much acid.
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Thunder announces
sky shedding beverage base
tipping chin to drink.
Very nice images in your rainy day haiku, I really like your L3-nice job!
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