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Bald women haiku

Bald-headed women
Sucking my huge bulging knob
Get spunk on their scalps

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  • LeanneBridgewater
    August 4, 2008
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    funny

    what a strong force of splurgery wordage.. i'll applaud you for it!


  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 11, 2008
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    I just re-read this. Ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh! It's oso kinky.


  • cfh1167
    December 21, 2007

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    You right very funny poetry,as you've probably been told so many times before,and I realize a poem doesn't have to be long to be good.By the way,why do bald chicks looks so great in long dresses??


  • sanch011
    October 30, 2007
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    hahahahahhahahahhahahaha I love it


  • jcat gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Ok.... well after reading edna's poems and comments on others i can see why you won the gold!! This was pretty damn funny!! congrats!!!

  • Edna Sweetlove
    October 27, 2007

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    Dear oh dear. Well, there's no arguing with that one. You just won a gold cup. Brevity is indeed the arse-soul of wit.

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