In a place where dreams
gently lie
There is a land of happiness
where no one ever cries
Smiles and giggles are heard
as children play
Where a warm breeze moves the trees
with a gentle sway
People say hello as they pass one
another each day
Within each heart and soul faith
and hope come to stay
Just where may this beautiful
place be
Where lies our most cherished dreams
that we happily see
It lies deep within ones heart
ones soul
Along side of their deeply felt
wishes and goals
All one has to do is keep open their
hearts and minds
So their hopes and faith they
can easily find
Author notes
Yet again another one lifting up spirits which are low and feeling blue
A contest entry
- Inspire a young depressed soul, give me inspiration by Fedrizzi.
340 points, ended December 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Prewrite 3 by Heavenly Angel.
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Comments
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A truly wonderful piece of poetry this is! Ahhh to be in such a place as wonderful and beautiful as this; I think it would be..HEAVEN!
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HELLO SANDY
Thank you so much, I am so sad at this time and it seems this is when these kinds of writes come out from me. I am so thankful that my words can brighten up others days as they read, this means so much.
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lol, and you have lifted my spirits, ty for a wonderful write! good luck in the contest (^.^)
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i love this and its great.
its beautiful and it inspires people without faith to keep on going!
this is true:All one has to do is keep open their
hearts and minds
So their hopes and faith they
can easily find
its true because a lot of people give up way to easily.
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HELLO RANDOM
Thanks ever so much for reading and the kind words, I appreciate your thoughtful words so much.
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Like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of these lines; easy to read and understand what you are saying. Vivid visuals throughout - faith is so important, gives us hope for a better future.
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HELLO GRANNYERI
Thanks ever so much for taking the time to read my thoughts here. I do try to keep these very feelings and thoughts close to me always.
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goog luck on finding that happy place cause sometime i feel that there is no where like that, life is a fight keep fighting and maybe just maybe you WILL find that place
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HELLO RAINBOWLOVE
Thank you so much for taking the time to read I know this world seems so cruel and cold but I also feel we as people need to keep on trying to make a difference towards others.
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you have been improving so much lately that i am impressed. thank you again for yet another great write. i wish you well in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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HELLO VIYANNA
Thanks ever so much for taking the time to read my feelings and thoughts here. I appreciate it so much.
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this piece is very well written lovely uplifting read.
thank-you for sharing also this poem has a wonderful flow wich makes it a joy to read. -
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HELLO ANGEL-LOVER
Thank you ever so much for taking the time to read my thoughts here. I do try to keep these very thoughts and feelings close in my time of need.
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Powerful!!
Wow!!
Magnificent piece You have penned my Friend
Love the words brought forth~~
What a island of Paradise
You have described!!
I imagine many packing their bags
waiting to go~~~
Thank You for sharing Your Spirit!
Love this!!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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HELLO DESIRE
Once again your wonderful words touch me so much. And yes, yet again this is reaching deep within myself to find a certain harmony that is lacking to me right now.
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How wonderfully beautiful. This is paradise and a place I wish to live. How soon can we get there?
Lovely write of inspiration and hope of which you do so well.
Thank you for the warmth and love.
mystic
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HELLO MYSTIC
Once again you warm my heart with a wonderful comment I seem to be stuck on this lately. I do hope I can find my happiness soon.
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Absolutely Refreshing
Absolutely beautifully written thoughtful poem that sure touches one's heart and the depths of one's soul... You said the truth such a beautiful place is within us that only if we want to we can get to such a beautiful place where no one cries but there are only smiles to share to painful tears...May Lord give everyone strength & will to find their cherished place sooner than soon...
your words are simple
capture the beauty of life
touching one's longing heart
caressing the wandering soul
giving inspiration in every paragraph
making one's membership on allpoetry worth while...
Thanks for being an inspirationally amazing person... take care Minoo
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DEAR MINOO
I am deeply touched by your thoughtful words I am always amazed how as I write to lift myself up so many others are lifted up with me. In knowing this I feel so blessed in ways that God meant for each of us to feel and know.'s
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A beautiful soul searching write.
A beautiful soul seaching write for what you dear pure heart seek. This taken in context of thought and word is written with fine consideration of that special place in the heart, that everyone, holds dear to them. The title truely describes the cherished place that you love, you hope for and have faith that it does exist. So dear pure heart if you get the time please let me know what you think of Mathew chapter 7 verse 7 - 8, in your bible. To do with the last line, of your work, can easily find, see what you think ? But I am not going to tell you. You will only get the anwser if you look. A beautiful write, in all content, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts.
I dont know how these applauds work I would have liked to have given you three , but it says I only have two ?
so sorry, cant really work this point system out.
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HELLO LADYMAK
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a lovely comment. I will read that verse later today. I do try my best to keep my spirits up.
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beautiful!
a wonderful write, such vivid imagery, with a well used, uncliched rhymescheme. you have penned a fine piece here, my friend
lucy
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HELLO LUCY
Thanks ever so much for the lovely comment. I try so hard to keep my spirits up these days and sometimes it becomes so hard to do.
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