It's not easy to love me.
When I shake, break me.
When drop, hold me.
When I am scared, sing with me.
When I cry, paint with me.
When I disgust myself, look at me.
When I look down, turn me.
When I turn black, Colour me, friend.
A contest entry
- LOVEly POEMS by HerbalGoat.
402 points, ended May 25, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ecumenical Dialogue by ourgirlFriday.
600 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #75 Short Prayers by daviscth.
300 points, ended May 28, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A fresh start for my world of poetry by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended June 10, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The title of a National Competition was "Flight", tell me your thoughts on its suitability, etc, please.
Comments
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I really enjoyed how you composed this interesting piece and am glad you shared it in my contest. Thank you.
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It's an Interesting piece
Very broad upon the subject of dialogue ecumenically wise, but I think it fits. Best of luck in the contest!
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wow!
This is a very different piece from those I have read previously. The comparisons are not contradicting and have different interpretations. I like how you tell something positive after telling something negative. It seems like you have not given up. beautiful! bets of wishes in the contest! 
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Number 5 - sorry if this stops it being anonymous. I can guarantee that you won't have seen my poetry before - almost noone has read it on this site, except my visitors.
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That's fine- its a very intriguing piece. Short, simple, to-the-point, yet very endearing. "Colour me, Friend" is a wonderful concept and a very sweet sentiment. Overall, lovely.
Best Wishes!
Cordelia
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