Pitter-patter says
the rain in a gentle stream.
"May I have this dance?"
A contest entry
- Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 1 - Prewrites by xTomorrowx.
450 points, ended November 5, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow...
great job on this... normally, i dont like reading haikus, but this is amazing!
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this is such a beautiful write for short words it holds so much within it. well done and keep penning
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Whoa!
Beautiful! I followed you over from the quote contest. Thought I'd do some reading. I've been wowed. On my way to read more.
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Beautiful, both the poetry and the background in this piece... lovely word choice, brings the love in this close to the readers heart. Goodluck in the contest.
Karen
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wow!
this is so very nice and gives a fresh take. I loved how you give feelings to the rain. it is usually said from a person's P.O.V but this is from the rain's and it's simply brilliant! the background's sweet too. best of wishes in both the contests!
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Wonderful haiku here, I love it, short poems are brilliant, if written well they're definitely my favourites... This is awesome...
Thanks so much for entering and good luck =)
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Oh WoW! So exquisitely done. The words come down like they are beautiful rain drops themselves. I love this background. I would even like to use it myself if you would give me permission. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!
Ted E
PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain
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Sure, go ahead and use it!
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!
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Wow! This haiku flows better than 98% of all haikus. I love the image, well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Aww, only 98%?
Just kidding! Thanks for your comment!!!
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Well Done
Great entry, this should be a winner, Dad
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Thank you, Dad!
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Pitter-patter says
the rain in a gentle stream.
"May I have this dance?"
Just wonderful, your L3 is a delightful thought within this rainy day haiku. Thank you so much!
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