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[ * ] Rain Haiku

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 cleansing chrystal clear
ascending gift from the heavens
the tears of nurture

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Wow, you have picked some spectacular word choice in this piece to get your images across. I love this, well done and goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • Melodies
    October 30, 2007

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    Halku! My challenge and I love it!

    You have mastered haiku, which was my most difficult form to attempt. This rain haiku is marvelous and right on time for our autumn rains.


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Impressive! I love how you used the gray background and the raindrops at the side. It gives it that truly rainy feeling. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!


    Ted E


    PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain


  • aliceramone
    October 27, 2007
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    beautiful!


  • azure85 gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    cleansing chrystal clear
    ascending gift from the heavens
    the tears of nurture

    What a beautiful haiku, with the clear raindrops falling down in a great haiku. Thank you so much!


  • Tercil gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    tears of nurture, m that sounds like the origin and the heavens don't seem so important as the cleansing agent get to work. Like this!

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