Your sexy smile
Falls into a kiss
Lips sensual touch
Tease my breast
Thighs shivers
Feeling you inside my warm place
Passions flames fire
Look into my eyes, breathe...
Forever
A contest entry
- can you do it in under 30 words (ADULT) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow
What an outstanding Write! Wow. Hahahahah. "Thighs shivers" s/b "Thighs shiver". While thighs are plural, you only need a singular verb there. This is a spell binding write from a woman's point of view. Never thought of it like that before, but then, I am a man! Keep writing these. Walt.
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nice take for this contest of mine.
you did a nice job with it.
Riftkin
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