On your lap, getting bare
Mustn't touch, so take care
Bottom rubs where you need it
What you're wanting, she'll feed it
You're below, she's above
You're in love!
Author notes
Contest asked for a response to a lap dance poster in under 30 words. I really wanted exactly 30 see if you can spot the last minute change.
A contest entry
- can you do it in under 30 words (ADULT) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
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lol..always wanted to try and give a lap dance...sounds fun...
great write!
L-R-P
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Any man you ever meet
Would love for you to pick him
Just remember the dancers rules
Don't stop to kiss and lick him! -
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damn i hate rules...
How about i just break the rules lol -
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The dancer always makes the rules
(Unless the club won't let her)
So if she wants she can ask her man
While she dances to pet her
And she can dance as close as she likes
Or closer than close if you think...
And all it takes is a pretty smile
And a very sexy wink!
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*wink wink*
*smile*
at u -
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Get dancing!
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*pushes u on the chair and grinds ass into you*
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I like this
the rhyme is great
and the feel of it is nice
that is one sweet take for my contest
Riftkin
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Well done! I enjoyed this piece...and I really liked how you used that last line. Really beautiful...and sexy, too. Wish you all the best.
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lol great write for the contest... i wish you all the best.. i never seen it before so i have no idea about the change..lol
cheers
Jen
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