I'm having picnic dreams of summer
this is what my mind perceives
with the music of the waters
and the trembling of the leaves
The elevation of the mountains
is exactly what I need
for my various aspirations
and my notes of mental seeds
Breezes are implied and wanted
to complete this candid scene
now a hammock to relax on
makes it all just so serene.
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Liquid memories.
575 points, ended November 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice. thank you for entering. success to you.
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I love this.
Its a terrific "feel good poem"
good luck in the contest -
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Thank you, I like the sound of that
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Very hopeful
This is a very nice poem and I felt engrossed as the poem progressed it feels like a summer breeze just reading it makes you feel as though your there very good poem
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Thank you so much for this comment and review. So encouraging
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