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Central Attraction

Missing image
Pole dancing!
Diversion from the slimy cheats
Perversion who shall say they go
Illusion that these mens' retreats,
Attention their devotions, know
Temptation targets all these treats. 
Hole advancing!
 

Author notes

Under 30 words, Hows 29?

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 28, 2007
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    I think 29 is great
    for this is one wonderful
    poem you have written

    Riftkin


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 27, 2007

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    G'day Titus

    Interesting take on the prompt.

    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 27, 2007

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    Oh my brother Titus...lol much better now thank you for sharing...and (remember to label adult for us kids )


  • rite
    October 27, 2007

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    The illusion of being allowed to deposit
    Whatever men feel they must get rid of
    Exposes their disturbing lack of wit
    And their inability to love

    Good luck in the contest!

    Chris


  • Canto-Brasileiro
    October 27, 2007

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    You know, you can do very well using only few words. Why to extend when you can give the
    perfect image with a short poem
    Hole advancing, how appropriate line to that graphic you have above and to the content of your poem.
    Well done!

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