Stimulating me with erotic rotation of her pelvis,
titillating , seductive, sexy dancing to entice.
Her body coiling, gyrating, caressing the pole,
arousal peaks, pleasuring me not once, but twice.
Author notes
Picture prompt, in 30 words or less.
I have never read or written anything 'sensual' before so I hope this is ok.
A contest entry
- can you do it in under 30 words (ADULT) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Will first let me say, WOW! Wonderfully hot and sensual in so few words. For someone who has never done it before (write it that is) you did it with flare.
Well done!
Sometimes we find we are more versatile then we realised.Best to you!
Love,
mystic
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to lap dance on a pole
hooked to a man
dearest that is hot
thank you for this
Riftkin
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Pole dancing, eh? what's the big deal hahaha you have captured the mentality quite well Good luck in the contest
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Good rhyme. I liked the passion here.
Thanks for your comment.
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Hot and juicy. I love it.
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