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Fade Away

All I want to do is fade away
& each dizzy spell brings
me one step closer to perfection
[it'll be worth it when I'm pretty]

& every time someone says something
it only motivates me more;
everything would be ok if I
could just be good enough
[but the truth is I know
I'm not even worth the
air I breathe]


[please let me disappear;
I hate myself so much]

Author notes

Yeah...

8) Write something depresseing, make me feel your pain

Give Me

Option 2: anorexia or bulimia or EDNOS or orthorexia or you get the picture. Basically, the disorders. If you choose this, put which one in your AN. (Anorexia)

& sort of

Option 6: dirty pretty. Don't go OTT with it though, I want to be able to read it.

1:
Tell me what it's like to have low self confidence.
Describe your appearance the way you see it, and how you feel about the way you look.

Madison Mary.

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    July 28, 2008

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    A Very powerful, deep and emotional write. ^-^ Seems very personal, thank you so much for sharing. =] It was very well written and truly wonderful.


  • dancer90
    February 2, 2008

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    hmmm. Very good!

    exactly how i feel everyday
    the first week back from summer vacation my sophomore year (06) lots of people told me how good and thin (and some how very thin) i looked (most bhind my back and i heard later from friends (that summer before sophomore year, i had started in jv cheer and lost almost 30 pounds in that summer, but then gained back 15ish [stupid huge 16th bday party])
    but every time i heard it i would feel myself smiling without meaning to
    ANYWAY
    well, overall, all lines fit well and coudl be related to.

    Good luck in my contest adn thanks for entering

    Laura <3


  • Heartbeatsxfading
    November 27, 2007

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    This is really really good,

    I wish it would have been longer, but you say it all in what you have.

    "[but the truth is I know
    I'm not even worth the
    air I breathe]


    [please let me disappear;
    I hate myself so much]"

    I l-l-loved this part!!!


  • Perfiction
    November 16, 2007

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    I like this, the ending was a little disappointing but the rest is relative, emotional and yet the imagery is beautiful.

    Nicely penned

  • Destined4Destruction
    November 14, 2007
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    Sometimes I know how you feel....Thanks for writing a great entry....


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    November 2, 2007

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    I can feel you're pain. I often don't feel good enough either. I'm broken hearted, have no friends that live near me, am visually impaired and need anti depressants due to all these things. I am a miserable person and it all hurts. I loved him so much, we were together a year and a half, but known each other for 4 years and have been close a lot. I hate all the ways I feel. I often don't think I deserve even the ones who done me wrong. Sometimes I think they are better than me. I know how this feels, I'm sorry you feel so miserable too.


  • Hipsis94
    October 31, 2007

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    well i definitely feel pain
    never think you are worthless or should just disappear
    everyone at Marian St loves you soo much
    and we would hate to see you fade away
    so just smile and try to think positively
    Luv ya xx.x


  • teenagefailure
    October 29, 2007

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    This is good. I really like how its all to be perfect. I also like all the power in it. This is really good, i really felt your pain in this! Great job, and good luck in my contest!
    -Erin Lynn


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    October 27, 2007

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    aww
    the last lines in the brackets are heart breaking.
    cheer up deary.
    good luck in the contest.

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