The nights burn
with an appetite for your touch
as days breathe thoughts that beg for lust
to consume all love in a moment’s pass
when tomorrow yields you home
at last.
A contest entry
- Passion: 50 words or less by Lj-.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest, I promise it won't hurt;
Comments
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reads like kind of a run on sentence, but in a god way... I like the way these thoughts are combined and seem meant to be read all at once...
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I really liked this.
The passion is so clear.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck.
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G'day s
Gorgeous write. Passion at it's peak ... beautiful
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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the imagery in this write is stellar.
its amazing
Good luck in the contest and blessed be.
xx
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